Hauntingly good, especially the segment told from the point of view of the non-Alex characters. The coffee-shop chapter is the best in my opinion, and the one about the super soldiers from the perspective of the Marines is also very strong. The author's style is solid, and he/she has a good grasp of grammar, too, so don't be afraid to jump in.
FanficRecs Liangnui's Review
Hauntingly good, especially the segment told from the point of view of the non-Alex characters. The coffee-shop chapter is the best in my opinion, and the one about the super soldiers from the perspective of the Marines is also very strong. The author's style is solid, and he/she has a good grasp of grammar, too, so don't be afraid to jump in.